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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Causes and Consequences of Domestic Violence

  1. Cricrinel profile image80
    Cricrinelposted 11 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Causes and Consequences of Domestic Violence (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Ashish Dadgaa profile image76
      Ashish Dadgaaposted 11 days ago in reply to this

      Hello Elizabeth,

      Your hub is very informative. It needs few improvements such as:
      - Attractive title
      - Opening Introduction paragraph
      - Impactful conclusion / ending
      - Give caption and website reference to your photos
      - Check your photos are creative common?
      - Add relevant video to your hub

      I hope it works.

      Bless you.

      1. Cricrinel profile image80
        Cricrinelposted 11 days ago in reply to this

        Hello Ashish,

        thank you for your feedback. I'm going to have a look again in my article.

        Kind regards
        Elizabeth

        1. SakinaNasir53 profile image79
          SakinaNasir53posted 11 days ago in reply to this

          Hi Elizabeth! Welcome to HubPages. ☺
          Your hub is good and informative.
          Trying making these changes:
          1. Use the APA guidelines for your title, headings and subheadings.
          2. Ensure that your images are in the public domain (free of coyright).
          3. Add the proper source name or URL of your image.
          4. Add appropriate videos if you can.
          5. Adding callouts, polls or tables can increase reader engagement and give a good look to your hub.
          6. You could add details about stopping domestic violence. Give suggestions and opinions about it.
          7. Conclude your hub well.

          Hope this helps. Good luck!

          1. Cricrinel profile image80
            Cricrinelposted 7 days ago in reply to this

            I have to admit that your comments were very useful! I really appreciate it! Thank you!

 
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