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I would like feedback on my hub:

  1. passionatelearnr profile image86
    passionatelearnrposted 9 days ago
  2. Marisa Wright profile image92
    Marisa Wrightposted 9 days ago

    You have some strange spacing in this Hub.  Sometimes there's a lot of white space after a heading, sometimes there's a lot of white space before a heading.  Edit your capsules and check that there are no extra blank lines, especially at the end of capsules.

    You have several minor grammatical mistakes.  Try running your Hub through a program like Grammarly.

    Finally, you have a book at the end.  You do say you recommend the book but it's a half-hearted recommendation which doesn't make it clear why you think that book, in particular, is so useful.

  3. passionatelearnr profile image86
    passionatelearnrposted 9 days ago

    Thank You Marisa,That's very kind of you.

  4. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 8 days ago

    There are also problems with punctuation. A period/full stop is always followed by a space.

    1. passionatelearnr profile image86
      passionatelearnrposted 8 days ago in reply to this

      Thank you Rupert,for pointing out that to me.
      Can i add a photo from another website(thats not free photos site)  to my hub?

      1. Marisa Wright profile image92
        Marisa Wrightposted 8 days ago in reply to this

        If you have permission from that website, yes.  If not, no.

        1. passionatelearnr profile image86
          passionatelearnrposted 7 days ago in reply to this

          Thank You Marisa.

 
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