I would like feedback on my hub: http://hubpages.com/relationships/Signs … With-a-Man
You have some strange spacing in this Hub. Sometimes there's a lot of white space after a heading, sometimes there's a lot of white space before a heading. Edit your capsules and check that there are no extra blank lines, especially at the end of capsules.
You have several minor grammatical mistakes. Try running your Hub through a program like Grammarly.
Finally, you have a book at the end. You do say you recommend the book but it's a half-hearted recommendation which doesn't make it clear why you think that book, in particular, is so useful.
There are also problems with punctuation. A period/full stop is always followed by a space.
Thank you Rupert,for pointing out that to me.
Can i add a photo from another website(thats not free photos site) to my hub?
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