I'd like feedback on my Hub: Flirting Tips That Never Fail

  1. Vagisha Arora profile image78
    Vagisha Aroraposted 8 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Flirting Tips That Never Fail. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 8 days ago in reply to this

      Wow... you joined seven hours ago (at the time of me posting this) and have published three hubs!

      The issues I see with this one are:

      Grammatical errors. You could run your text through an online grammar checker, such as Grammarly. You can also read it out loud - this will often alert you to phrasing errors.

      You must use images that are either your own, or have been published under a Creative Commons license, or are in the Public Domain. You should also cite the source of your images. The ones you are using currently are pixelated. See the Learning Center for tips on using images correctly: https://hubpageshelp.com

      The hub ends very abruptly. That won't prevent it from being published but it is unprofessional. Could you add a paragraph to summarise the main points?

      Good luck.

      1. Vagisha Arora profile image78
        Vagisha Aroraposted 8 days ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your advice…
        I will keep things in mind… smile
        Btw published 3 because I just needed a platform to post my writings.
        I have been writing for long!

 
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