I'd like feedback on my Hub: Doctor Strange Review

  1. rhodamonihan profile image60
    rhodamonihanposted 6 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Doctor Strange Review (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image93
    Rupert Taylorposted 6 days ago

    Hello Rhoda

    I see some problems with your Hub that will get in the way of approval.
    Large blocks of type need to be broken up into smaller paragraphs.
    Images need to be sprinkled within the text; be sure you have permission to use images which must be under a Creative Commons license.
    There are several long, run-on sentences that need to be edited into shorter sentences.
    There are a few minor grammar issues. Try running your text through a program such as Grammarly.
    Finally, and perhaps the biggest issue, is that this is a crowded field. Sites such as Rotten Tomatoes and IMDB are the go-to places for movie reviews. Your review is going to be many pages down a Goggle search.
    You need to spend some time at the HubPages Learning Center to understand what the site is looking for.
    https://hubpageshelp.com/

    1. rhodamonihan profile image60
      rhodamonihanposted 6 days ago in reply to this

      Thank you.

 
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