I'd like feedback on my Hub: The

  1. James M Becher profile image60
    James M Becherposted 38 hours ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The "gift-of-Reading" gift guide. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 35 hours ago in reply to this

      Hi James,

      Check through for typos - there are a few. 'Instead' in the first paragraph should have a capital I. DVDs (no apostrophe required).

      HubPages might not like you promoting your own book disguised as a recommendation.

      The title is a bit clumsy. "Reading Gift Guide" or similar would be better.

      Have you got permission to use all the images?

      Poles? Do you mean Polls?

      When quoting text, make sure it stands out. Put it in its own paragraph, in italics.

      Hope that helps.

 
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