I was notified that one of my hubs is eligible to be moved to Dengarden if I make a few changes. Can someone tell me what "APA title case" is? I'm being asked to use it. Also, I'm being accused of "keyword stuffing". Sorry, I didn't mean to but there aren't any synonyms for potatoes or seed potatoes! I can eliminate some but I'd like to know if there is an optimal ratio of keywords to text so that I kow how many mentions of potatoes and seed potatoes that I need to eliminate. Thanks!
You could also use words like them, they, the seeds. I had a similar problem with my hub on White Elephant Gift Exchange. I hadn't intentionally stuffed it, but I did repeat that phrase many times, and I was able to eliminate many of them when I put my mind to it.
Oh, it's not a matter of not enough variety. I use the word "potato" too many times. I write for gardeners, not Google, so I don't pay attention to SEO rules. Another problem could be the term "seed potato" being counted as keyword "potato" even though a gardener considers them two completely different terms. Hence my inquiry about the maximum number times I can use "potato" in my hub without making Google unhappy.
Patty, things must have changed since I last took a grammar class (back when dinosaurs roamed the Earth!) because I was taught differently. Those are sentences and only the first word should be capitalized whether they are used in a paragraph or as a heading.
Same here - I've found the APA guidelines to be nothing like our usual grammar classes, for sure, and the latest 6th edition has several changes. But ask Team@Hubpages.com for sure to find out exactly what they want. Best of success to you!
Thanks, Sherry. I can definitely re-work a few sentences. I was just curious how many of the offending keywords I needed to get rid of. I know that there is an optimal ratio of keyword to text but I can't find it.
I can't really answer how many, or what percentage I removed. Once I edited it though, I didn't think the hub actually lost anything in the process. Reduce it as much as you can, to where people can still understand what you're saying, and it sounds like natural conversation.
I had a similar thing recently with the word 'drill' in a page about 'drills'. The editor is right, there are a lot of instances of the word on the page, and I remember struggling to keep the number down when I wrote it.
I sympathise. I have the same problem with many dance subjects - there is no other word for "pointe shoes", for instance.
I assume it's your "Guide to Growing Potatoes"
I can see why the moderator may have thought you were keyword stuffing, although I know you do not play those games. But I can see several sentences where you've repeated the word "potatoes" when it's unnecessary, and in fact the sentence would read better if it were not repeated, e.g.
"Originally there were many wild species of potatoes and you would think that the 5,000 varieties of potatoes we have today originated from those many different wild potatoes" could be written as "Originally there were many wild species of potatoes and you would think that the 5,000 varieties we have today originated from them".
"If you are not using straw or grow bags for your potatoes, you will need to dig up your potatoes to harvest them" would probably read better as "If you are not using straw or grow bags, you will need to dig up your potatoes to harvest them."
I think if you just make sure you're not repeating in a sentence, it will be fine. I would not add any more "tubers" because that is probably used often enough already.
Hi - Start by taking out the ones you said you can naturally take out. Don't try and make weird sentences just to get rid of the word potato, but just make sure you haven't repeated the word unnaturally. That is what makes it look like it has been deliberately stuffed.
Next change all the titles and image titles, it looks strange but it is what you see most often in professional print and I guess it makes the niche websites look more consistent if everyone's articles appears the same in presentation.
Then see if it is enough. Don't stress out about it too much, it might only need a few tweaks.
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