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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Atheism in Spiritual India

  1. Maqbool Masi profile image79
    Maqbool Masiposted 6 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Atheism in Spiritual India. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. simplehappylife profile image82
    simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago

    Hello, Maqbool smile

    The first thing I see is the lack of imagery.  When writing a hub, you always want to add an image at the very top of your article (one that depicts the general topic).  A wonderful place to use free, high-quality commercial use images is pixabay https://pixabay.com/. 

    Second, while the hub is well-written, there are certain grammatical errors and missing words in many of your sentences.  You might consider using a program like Grammarly to help you clean up your work, https://grammarly.com.

    Other than that, I think you're on the right path.  It's a fascinating topic, and your writing style is well-developed.

    I hope that helps smile

    1. simplehappylife profile image82
      simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

      My own articles are featured hubs; you might want to swing by and check out a couple of them to see what I mean in regards to imagery.

    2. Maqbool Masi profile image79
      Maqbool Masiposted 6 months ago in reply to this

      Thank you for your suggestion. I will do it...

      1. simplehappylife profile image82
        simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

        You're Very Welcome smile   and Welcome to Hubpages!  smile

        You'll also see that I usually add an image in each capsule section (an image that is associated with that particular topic being discussed).  People like media rich articles and media plays a big part in whether or not your hub will be featured.

        1. Maqbool Masi profile image79
          Maqbool Masiposted 6 months ago in reply to this

          Nice, let me see

          1. simplehappylife profile image82
            simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

            One more thing, this below is a hub from the hubpages staff, on how to write a stellar hub smile  Well worth the read smile

            https://hubpageshelp.com/content/Learni … tellar-Hub

            1. Maqbool Masi profile image79
              Maqbool Masiposted 6 months ago in reply to this

              Thank you very much for your help. I have made changes as suggested. Would you please have a look?

              1. simplehappylife profile image82
                simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

                You're Welcome smile  I can tomorrow.  I just came on here for a second.

              2. simplehappylife profile image82
                simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

                Hi Maqbool smile

                I went to go re-read your hub for you and it wasn't there sad

                1. Maqbool Masi profile image79
                  Maqbool Masiposted 6 months ago in reply to this
                  1. simplehappylife profile image82
                    simplehappylifeposted 6 months ago in reply to this

                    You might want to check your link, there's nothing there sad

 
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