I'd like feedback on my Hub: My Lessons From Life Part 2

  1. Duane Herring profile image72
    Duane Herringposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub My Lessons From Life Part 2 (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Duane,

      Firstly, you've published the hub in the category of 'Health self-help'. It is in the wrong place so wont be approved for that reason. It needs to be in Creative writing.

      Secondly, it's a biographical account - while there is nothing wrong with that, it isn't the kind of article HP is encouraging. It's more suited to a personal blog. HP is looking for useful informative articles that attract search traffic.

      Thirdly, the formatting needs work. Most people access the internet these days on their phones and mobile devices, so when they are faced with big blocks of text they tend to reverse straight back out. Therefore, break up your text into smaller paragraphs and capsules. Add one or two relevant, legal-to-use images and even a bulleted list, if possible.

      Hope that helps.

      1. Duane Herring profile image72
        Duane Herringposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you.  I appreciate it.

 
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