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Would love some feedback and comments on my article

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    Siobhan Kearleyposted 4 months ago

    I'm new to HubPages and would appreciate it if I could get some feedback or comments on my most recent article on the use of ICT in Education.

    Thanks in advance.

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      Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      You need to cut down on the use of italics and boldface. Your images need to be credited and you must have permission to use them.

      The article is a bit light on useful and unique information and there are a few minor grammar problems - try running your text through a program such as Grammarly.

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    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    You need to post a link to the article in question, otherwise no one can help you.

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      Siobhan Kearleyposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      https://goo.gl/h3cf9n Sorry, thought it would be accessible through my profile. If not, here's the link. Thanks

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    Rupert Taylorposted 4 months ago

    One more thing I notice is the number of outgoing links. HP wants articles to be complete in themselves, it doesn't want readers to be sent offsite for information that should be contained in the piece.

 
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