http://hubpages.com/politics/Autralias-forgotten-past

  1. Mick Beet profile image79
    Mick Beetposted 3 months ago

    Can't  seem to get this  one publish

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      I don't really understand the title, Memorial for the Frontier war com'on Aussie's "Break the cycle "

      There are lots of grammatical errors. For example, what does 'sufficient effects' mean?

      Then there's, "The Australian War Memorial hasn't a place to recognise this event the Canberra National Gallery has a place for this event."

      This hub needs a lot of work to make it suitable for publishing. You could try an online grammar checker, but really you need a person fluent in English to go through it for you.

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 3 months ago

    A lot of the sentences are poorly constructed and do not seem to be written by a native of fluent speaker.  You also neglect to give basic information about when and where the conflict occur.

 
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