I'd like feedback on my Hub: Dealing With Depression

  1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image80
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Dealing With Depression. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Hi Rosa,

      Your URL is not connected to your title. It's okay for them to be different but using your name is not a good idea. You could start a new hub with a URL that matches the title and paste the text into it.

      'Agreeably' means 'pleasant'. For example, "The weather is agreeably warm." You are using it in the wrong context. You can say 'well known' or 'Doctors agree'.

      You are using too many lists:

      stress, anxiety, pressure, doubts, and fears
      physically, mentally and emotionally.
      persistent worry, stress, anxiety, fear, panic and trauma
      sadness, hopelessness, and emptiness.

      See it you can write them in a different way. Perhaps look for one word that will encompass some of these multiple nouns.

      Add a legal-to-use image near the top of the page.

      I'm sure you can make this into a really good article.

      Hope that helps.

 
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