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I'd like feedback on my Hub: 5 Ways To Snap Out of Depression

  1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image78
    Rosa Ann Crowderposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 5 Ways To Snap Out of Depression. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. WryLilt profile image86
    WryLiltposted 5 weeks ago

    Well firstly, if you can 'snap out of it', it's not depression.

    The article is short, doesn't flow well, has pixelated images and has a poem randomly stuck in it.

    Think about how magazine articles flow and make it neater, with more professional images (try Pixabay or Pexels for copyright free images) and think about putting the poem into a box so it's an 'extra' to the hub, instead of a point.

    1. Rosa Ann Crowder profile image78
      Rosa Ann Crowderposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      thank you

      1. SakinaNasir53 profile image84
        SakinaNasir53posted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

        Hi Rosa Ann Crowder! Welcome to HubPages. smile

        I agree with WryLit and I would like to suggest these points:

        1. The images included need to be attributed. Make sure they are in the public domain  (copyright free). Pixabay, Pexels.com and Morguefile.com are great to use. Flickr is good too. But you need to search for images in the Creative Commons there.

        2. Add an appropriate video.

        3. Callout capsules are good to highlight important points.

        4. Try adding more information to your hub. It's a bit short.

        5. It's always better to write about topics that you are genuinely passionate about and what people might be searching for.

        I hope this helps. Good luck!

 
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