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I'd like feedback on my Hub

  1. MomsTreasureChest profile image72
    MomsTreasureChestposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give your thoughts on how to return it to featured status, thank you.

    http://hubpages.com/food/How-to-Make-Ba … hell-Bowls

    1. SakinaNasir53 profile image84
      SakinaNasir53posted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      It says Not Published.

      1. MomsTreasureChest profile image72
        MomsTreasureChestposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thank you, it's published now.

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image92
    Rupert Taylorposted 5 weeks ago

    Lose the exclamation points! There are way too many of them. They should only be used along with some sort of expostulation such as Bang! or Wow! Even then they should be sprinkled judiciously in text.

    Cut your title down to a more manageable size.

    Remove the external links. HubPages does not like it when writers put in links that take readers away from pages.

    Hope that helps.

    1. MomsTreasureChest profile image72
      MomsTreasureChestposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thank you, I will take your advice and make the changes now.  I appreciate your taking the time to look at my hub and give your feeback!

 
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