I'd like feedback on my Hub: Post Plastic bags ban-alternatives to plastic groce

  1. Ecobuddybasket profile image60
    Ecobuddybasketposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Post Plastic bags ban-alternatives to plastic grocery bags and comparison (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Problems as I see them:

      1. Title needs reworking. Must shorter and capitalized as per Title Case.

      2. Title is repeated in sub-heading.

      3. Random capitalization, e.g. Pros and Cons.

      4. The intro is weak. "Why shouldn't we look for the best?" Best of what?

      5. The hub is too short.

      6. The various pros and cons described are weighted towards your product.

      7. It is obviously self-promotional and won't be approved for that reason. If you have been told that you can promote your business at HP, then you have been misinformed.

      Hope that helps.

  2. julieann26 profile image81
    julieann26posted 3 weeks ago

    The biggest mistake I see is that your username Ecobuddybasket matches the name of the products that are shown at the bottom of the article.  This is a big no-no on HubPages as you are not allowed to promote your business, so this will be the main reason as to why you are not getting featured.

    Grammar is also a problem.

 
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