I'd like feedback on my Hub: Why e-waste management is required

  1. Pal Makkar profile image61
    Pal Makkarposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Why e-waste management is required (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Rupert Taylor profile image95
      Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      There are issues with English grammar that are keeping your Hub from passing QA.

      "Global consumer demand is growing continuously for digital products. Digitalisation division is expanding across the world for enjoying  a comfortable and easier lifestyle. Disposable of the used over is now emerging as the biggest challenge."

      Your first two sentences seem to be repetitive but they are written so confusingly that I can't be sure.

      "Digitalisation division" [I don't know what this means].

      "for enjoying  a comfortable and easier lifestyle" [for people to enjoy a comfortable and easier lifestyle].

      "Disposable of the used over is now" [Disposal of used equipment in now].

      There are punctuation errors and the definite article "the" is missing in places.

      Are your images free of copyright restrictions?

      The Learning Center will give you lots of information about how to write good Hubs.  https://hubpageshelp.com/

 
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