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I'd like feedback on my Hub: A place that has not been discovered by Travelers.

  1. Theshahrukhkhan profile image61
    Theshahrukhkhanposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A place that has not been discovered by Travelers. Unseen Places to explore happiness. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Sorry but your hub falls well below the standard required.

      http://hubpageshelp.com

  2. AshutoshJoshi06 profile image85
    AshutoshJoshi06posted 2 weeks ago

    I suggest you shorten the title and make it more precise and relevant. Please proofread the entire hub. There are gramatical errors. Do correct the second last sentence.
    You would also want to avoid too much pluralization. Add little more description to your sub heads.

    All the best!

  3. Rubidium profile image73
    Rubidiumposted 2 weeks ago

    Write briefly, too many points and too little discussion. Make it look like a blog and not a leaflet, perhaps write history of every places in your blog

  4. Rupert Taylor profile image95
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 weeks ago

    The quality of your English is just not good enough.

    Kurnool is a place of [the] Mughals and [the] British Raj with many untold histories [should be stories].

    Kurnool is not [that much famous like a] Taj Mahal, [Kumool is not as famous as the Taj Mahal]

    but it is the most Historic area with many Temples and Sunny Climates. [but is an historic area with many temples and a sunny climate]

    What attracts the most in this place is Forts. [A major attraction is the forts].

    The rest of the Hub is filled with grammatical errors.

    1. Theshahrukhkhan profile image61
      Theshahrukhkhanposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thank you, sir, I appreciate it. I don't have any teacher who can teach me about my mistakes. I will try my best to improve my skills.

      1. theraggededge profile image96
        theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

        HubPages is aimed at an English-speaking readership, therefore all articles have to be written to a reasonable standard. If you don't have anyone who can proofread your work, you may have to consider waiting until your English skills are improved.

 
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