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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Have you wondered why some people are mean?

  1. honeyhere profile image73
    honeyhereposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Have you wondered why some people are mean? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Your article reads like a blog post and therefore may do better posted on your own site than here.

      There are many grammatical errors and misspellings that need to be corrected.

      You could spend some time at the Learning Center in order to find out what HubPages requires of its writers: https://hubpageshelp.com

      Hope that helps.

      1. honeyhere profile image73
        honeyhereposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

        I appreciate your help.
        Thanks

    2. RTalloni profile image87
      RTalloniposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      In response to your request theraggededge has given helpful feedback. It appears that you have not proofread the post.  You may need to study what proofreading is and how to do it.

      1. honeyhere profile image73
        honeyhereposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

        Yes.. and you are the moderator who had suggested that.. thanks. Frankly I do need to read it.. I googled but apparently Google helps the knowing mind here.
        Thanks again

 
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