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I would a feedback on my hub

  1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image83
    MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 weeks ago

    I would a feedback on my hub, please share your views
    https://hubpages.com/technology/jQuery- … Techniques

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      You have repeated the first paragraph twice. Otherwise, to my inexperienced eye, it looks like a useful and engaging resource. The screen shots aren't very good quality and might be a problem. Is your hub featured?

      1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image83
        MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thanks for pointing the duplicate paragraph, skilled my eye and yes of hub is featured but not on any network site.

        Regarding the screenshot, do you have any idea on which tool to use which can get great quality?

    2. Jason mackenzie profile image82
      Jason mackenzieposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi, I read through your article and it is definitely informative. Only hitch is I discovered some grammatical errors - for example, this sentence -

      'So, now that it is clear why jQuery should still be used, lets move forward and talk about the debugger, a tool or technique which we can use to understand our jQuery code that we have written, to identify and fix or reduce any bugs to make our code work the way we want it to.'

      lets can be put as let us or let's and you can also break it down into a couple of smaller sentences. Hope I have been helpful, thanks, regards...

      1. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image83
        MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thanks for you feedback Jason, appreciate it

 
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