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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Edhi Welfare Foundation

  1. Hamza Afzal profile image73
    Hamza Afzalposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Edhi Welfare Foundation (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. chasmac profile image99
    chasmacposted 3 weeks ago

    The link asking for donations for the foundation might be a problem.

  3. SherrieWeynand profile image79
    SherrieWeynandposted 3 weeks ago

    I agree, the donation link is one of the problems. Slight grammar issues also, but I think that might be a result of maybe English isn't a first language? Example: "for the family of deceased may come to claim." Perhaps find someone to proofread and make a few small grammatical issues. Include sources for your images as well.

  4. SherrieWeynand profile image79
    SherrieWeynandposted 3 weeks ago

    That should have read: make a few small grammatical changes.

    My phone has a mind of its own this morning.

 
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