I'd like feedback on my Hub: Is it NORMAL to feel like you don't fit in?

  1. Empathsoul profile image47
    Empathsoulposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Is it NORMAL to feel like you don't fit in? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image82
      Jason mackenzieposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi, I liked the hub overall and the only reason I can think of about this one not being published would be a couple of grammatical mistakes and some formatting issues.

      Grammar - I observed one of the headings as being 'Advantage of being the Black Sheep' when it should be Advantages. There are a couple of others also, like at one point it is mentioned 'Other times' when it should be 'At other times...'.

      Then there is this huge gap between the content and the last yellow pic. This could be bridged to ensure continuity.

      Thanks, regards...

      1. Empathsoul profile image47
        Empathsoulposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        Oh ok. I will update it. Thank you so much for taking the time to give your feedback.

 
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