I'd like feedback on my Hub: TimeNox - Monitor Employees Productivity

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    Alice Haleposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub TimeNox - Monitor Employees Productivity (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image87
      Jason mackenzieposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi, your intro could do with a bit of improvement. Somehow the 2 sentences starting with 'By' are not making sense to me, so may be you could try structuring them differently. Hope I have been helpful, thanks, regards...

    2. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      1. It's too short.
      2. It's promoting a product.
      3. It looks spammy.
      4. The grammar is poor.

      The software has been 'nulled', i.e. hacked or stolen, and is available for free. They also often contain malware. Why are you promoting it?

      If you are here to write, then write quality articles. If you are here to promote products and businesses, you can forget it.

      Hope that helps smile

 
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