I'd like feedback on my Hub: 3 Steps To Achieve Inner Peace

  1. ketan pande profile image78
    ketan pandeposted 4 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 3 Steps To Achieve Inner Peace (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image94
      theraggededgeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Here are my suggestions:

      Move the reader poll to the bottom of the hub.

      Go through the text, or have someone go through it for you. You are sometimes omitting 'the' where you need it, and putting it in where it is not required. Inner peace doesn't require 'the' before it. "Constant conflict in mind..." does need 'the' before 'mind'.

      You could also paste your text into Grammarly - it's a free online grammar checking app. It won't pick up every error though.

      Limit your images to two and make them full size. Place the first one just below your first introductory paragraph.

      I suspect the grammar issues are causing problems for your other hubs too, so apply what I've said above to those.

      Hope that helps.

      1. ketan pande profile image78
        ketan pandeposted 4 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks

 
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