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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Ten Ways to Find Success in Life

  1. ketan pande profile image73
    ketan pandeposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Ten Ways to Find Success in Life (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Ketan, be careful not to post too many requests for feedback. And don't repost one that you've already had feedback on. I know HubPages keeps sending the emails, but it's better to go back to the original thread and ask again there. People hate it when the forum gets cluttered up with identical threads - it's confusing.

      1. ketan pande profile image73
        ketan pandeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Sorry and thanks for telling me. Your tips are really helpful.

    2. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image79
      MuhammadAmeen89posted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Just went through your hub

      --->In the first line "but very few wishes to pay the price". I think it should be "wish to pay the price"

      --> 1s parag "and keep pursuing his passion". I think to should be "kept"

      --->The 2nd point "2. Learning". Extra space between the title and text

      ---> Too much space between the last and second last para.

      1. ketan pande profile image73
        ketan pandeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

        Thanks for your help

 
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