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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Foundation Repair Tips

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    itsjohnvegaposted 4 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Foundation Repair Tips (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image87
      Jason mackenzieposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi, I would start with the first heading - How to fix cracks? - you could either remove the question mark or frame it differently, like how should you fix cracks?

      Secondly, you can use more subheadings to spread your content . Am not sure about the links that you have used - if these are meant to be promotional then it would hinder with the approval process.

      Hope I have been helpful, thanks, regards...

    2. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      You cannot use HubPages to promote your business. The hub will never be approved in its present state so you are wasting your time.

    3. MuhammadAmeen89 profile image81
      MuhammadAmeen89posted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      In the 2nd paragraph "C" is capital
      Consult a structural engineer for advice on foundation repairs and "Check" for expansive soils

      The title is not clear. I know the title should not be large but it should not be vague.

      I was lost when I reached "Evaluate the company", there is no proper sequence

    4. Marketing Merit profile image85
      Marketing Meritposted 4 weeks ago in reply to this

      Your hub is spam and will never be approved in its present format. You have written it to promote a business and not to inform readers about repairing foundations. Sorry to be harsh, but Hubpages is not the place for this.

 
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