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I'd like feedback on my Hub: My New Careless Hair - Hair Dryer Holder

  1. ShelbyMarind profile image59
    ShelbyMarindposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub My New Careless Hair - Hair Dryer Holder. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      This needs some work before it will be approved.

      You can't use the Amazon review - that's classed as duplicate content. There is a way to get round the duplicate content flag, and that is to take a screenshot or snipping of the review and upload as an image. I've never tried it on Hubpages but you could give it a go.

      Remove the bold text and the text that you've formatted as a heading.

      Lose all the exclamation points. They make writing look amateurish. Ditto, the over-friendly "trust me" and "don't judge me". It's insincere. You can create a nice writing 'voice' without such overt tactics.

      Write more content. The hub is too short and will be even shorter once you've removed the copied text.

      Spend some time learning how to produce a good hub. https://hubpageshelp.com

      Hope this helps.

      1. ShelbyMarind profile image59
        ShelbyMarindposted 3 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you. I will do this.

    2. Jason mackenzie profile image89
      Jason mackenzieposted 2 months ago in reply to this

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