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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Praying for God’s Mission in Light of the Old Testa

  1. D L Roderick profile image82
    D L Roderickposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Praying for God’s Mission in Light of the Old Testament - Part 10. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    I'm wondering if this is because I have link to prayer app in my hub.

    Dave R.

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      The app may well be the problem.

      Also change the word 'hub' to 'article'. Visitors have no clue what a 'hub' is.

    2. Jason mackenzie profile image87
      Jason mackenzieposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi, I observed a couple of discrepancies in your writing. For example, in the first sentence, everything is in present tense except for the word 'asked'. This could be changed to 'asks' to maintain uniformity.

      Secondly, this sentence of yours - You know people that prayer just seems to be easy for them. The word 'people' is somehow not making sense. If it is just for addressing your readers, I suggest it should be removed because it is sounding too colloquial. It might seem appropriate while speaking but not while writing.

      Thanks, regards...

  2. psycheskinner profile image81
    psycheskinnerposted 2 months ago

    The Daniel images is pixelated.  I would suggest replacing it.

 
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