I'd like feedback on my Hub: Shine out depression, for you are a light of the Lo

  1. Alise Schmitt profile image77
    Alise Schmittposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Shine out depression, for you are a light of the Lord. (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jason mackenzie profile image86
      Jason mackenzieposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi, to be honest I could not find anything wrong with your hub and enjoyed going through. Only suggestion that I can forth is to maybe changes a few words and see if it makes a difference.

      For example - For a while, I was feeling overwhelmed by a darkness....You can change it to - For a while, I felt overwhelmed by a darkness...Again there is nothing wrong with your choice of words and it is just something that you can try and see if it makes a difference. Thanks, regards...

  2. Alise Schmitt profile image77
    Alise Schmittposted 2 weeks ago

    Thank you, Jason! I'll run through it again with that in mind.

 
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