I'd like feedback on my Hub: The Lorelei

  1. Alexiana Cirier profile image72
    Alexiana Cirierposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub The Lorelei (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image96
    Rupert Taylorposted 2 months ago

    Movie reviews are difficult. You are up against behemoths such as IMDB and Rotten Tomatoes that suck all the traffic from the web.

    Your article has some punctuation and grammar issues:

    "The basic plot is around Daniel (played by Kemal Yildirim), an ex-policeman, who shares his home with a young university student ,(no space before comma) Sarah(played by Sophie Cityend) outside Oxford, England. Daniel is a troubled man, haunted by his past. He was in brief a (a brief) relationship with a prostitute that he had hired called Kelly (played by Sophie Renée), however he broke things of (off) with her which lead (led) to her committing suicide."

    Your image needs to be credited and has to be free of copyright restrictions.

    The Hub is too short. HP likes at least 1,000 words.

    Try spending time at the Learning Center here https://hubpageshelp.com/

  3. Alexiana Cirier profile image72
    Alexiana Cirierposted 2 months ago

    Thanks for advice Rupert, I will give a go!

 
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