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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Parenting - Deep concern for every children

  1. jkaur36 profile image54
    jkaur36posted 13 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Parenting - Deep concern for every children. What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. jkaur36 profile image54
    jkaur36posted 13 days ago

    What improvement s needed in this article..? Is it not up to the mark.

    1. chasmac profile image97
      chasmacposted 13 days ago in reply to this

      A quick glance showed you have far too many English errors - starting with your title. The word you need is "Child" not "children". (and "concern" should be "Concern".)

    2. ketan pande profile image64
      ketan pandeposted 13 days ago in reply to this

      Please proofread your article, there are many mistakes of periods and commas. You can use Grammarly to check grammar mistakes.

  3. theraggededge profile image96
    theraggededgeposted 13 days ago

    The text reads as though it has been run through an online translator. It's very bad and will never be approved in its current state. HubPages requires a fluent level of English so, without a great improvement, this may not be the right place for you to write.

 
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