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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Astounding Benefits Of Playing Action Video Games O

  1. lmajdob profile image60
    lmajdobposted 3 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Astounding Benefits Of Playing Action Video Games Online (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      Looks like poorly translated or spun content to me sad

      "Actually, playing activity amusements can profit both kids and grown-ups in different ways. Before you or your kids play free recreations that include activity, guarantee they are reasonable."

      I can see subheadings embedded in the text, which clearly points to this being spun content.

      1. lmajdob profile image60
        lmajdobposted 3 months ago in reply to this

        Thank you very much

    2. ketan pande profile image77
      ketan pandeposted 3 months ago in reply to this

      There are many repetitive words, unusual word pair, and also you should elaborate and break the article in subtopics.

    3. Custos Pacis profile image60
      Custos Pacisposted 3 months ago

      Thanks for the feedback wink

       
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