Hi Hubbers,I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Astounding Benefits Of Playing Action Video Games Online (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!
Looks like poorly translated or spun content to me "Actually, playing activity amusements can profit both kids and grown-ups in different ways. Before you or your kids play free recreations that include activity, guarantee they are reasonable."I can see subheadings embedded in the text, which clearly points to this being spun content.
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There are many repetitive words, unusual word pair, and also you should elaborate and break the article in subtopics.
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