I'd like feedback on my Hub: Is it Normal to Feel like You don't Fit in this Wor

  1. Empathsoul profile image63
    Empathsoulposted 2 months ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Is it Normal to Feel like You don't Fit in this World? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 2 months ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Capitalise 'don't' in the title.

      Remove the subtitle in the first image capsule. It's not usually necessary to add a title to images, it just looks messy. That one image has four labels. It doesn't need a caption either. It will have more impact if unadorned.

      Remove one of the Amazon capsules.

      Remove the star ratings capsule.

      Deal with the long right-aligned column which has nothing on the left to balance it. Check both mobile and desktop previews to make sure everything looks right.

      Check for typos - there are several. Read the text out loud and they'll show up.

      Hope that helps.

  2. iwrite100 profile image80
    iwrite100posted 2 months ago

    Check the upper right corner of your hub when you are editing it - there are several parameters there that are helpful smile

 
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