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Would you like to write an autobiographical poem together?

  1. threekeys profile image82
    threekeysposted 3 weeks ago

    We lead in with the same lines but we individually finish of the endings.

    "I seem to be............"
    "But really I am........."

    So I wil start with-

    I seem to be as restless as a apck of army ants
    But really I am the eye of the storm

    What are your two lines to add to-

    "I seem to be............"
    "But really I am........."

    1. kenneth avery profile image81
      kenneth averyposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      "I seem to be running."
      "But really I am sitting still."

      1. Jodah profile image85
        Jodahposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        Ok, what I wrote originally doesn't really fit into a poem, so let's try.

        "I seem to be climbing,
        But really I am just up against a hill."
        To follow Kenneth's.

    2. mike102771 profile image84
      mike102771posted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      I seem to be lonely

      but really I am choosing to be alone
      https://usercontent1.hubstatic.com/13556514.jpg

      1. Natalie Frank profile image97
        Natalie Frankposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        Following Mike's

        I seem to be like dandelion on the wind
        But really I am a sinking stone

    3. tsmog profile image84
      tsmogposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      I seem to be here,
      But really I am there.

      1. mike102771 profile image84
        mike102771posted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        I seem to be imaginary
        But really, I am real

  2. threekeys profile image82
    threekeysposted 3 weeks ago

    PS Sorry for the typos.....will...pack

  3. Jodah profile image85
    Jodahposted 3 weeks ago

    I seem to be content in my own company and shying away from unnecessary social contact.
    But really I am trying to fulfil my greater purpose and promote a message to the wider community through my writing.

    1. threekeys profile image82
      threekeysposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      Jodah I am confused from what you have written or not written.
      If you dont want join in then there was no need for you to reply.
      If you are trying to express something to me personally then you need to be more up front. Cheers.

      1. Jodah profile image85
        Jodahposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

        What I wrote was joining in here..I was writing about how I may be seen in the real world away from HubPages. I can't see how there is any contradiction. You said it was autobiographical which means about ourselves..right?

        1. threekeys profile image82
          threekeysposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

          Bowing out

 
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