I'd like feedback on my Hub: 4 Trends are changing lives of billions people

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    curioslearnerposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub 4 Trends are changing lives of billions people (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

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      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there,

      Some suggestions:

      Put your title into Title Case and correct the grammatical error in it '...Billions of People'.

      Use correct punctuation.

      Break up the big blocks of text into proper paragraphs (one idea = one paragraph).

      Correct the grammar throughout.

      Add an introduction to tell your readers what the article is about. Add a conclusion to tell them what they just read smile

      Add at least one legal-to-use image

      Spend some time at the Learning Center: https://hubpageshelp.com

      Hope that helps.

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    curioslearnerposted 2 weeks ago

    Thanks a lot for your feedback

 
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