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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Manas Kumar Das- A devoted exponent of Nazrul Sange

  1. SSS1942 profile image80
    SSS1942posted 6 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Manas Kumar Das- A devoted exponent of Nazrul Sangeet (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Jeremy Gill profile image90
      Jeremy Gillposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Did you remove the article? The link doesn't work, and I don't see it on your profile.

      1. SSS1942 profile image80
        SSS1942posted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

        I didn't remove the article. Its still here.

        1. Jeremy Gill profile image90
          Jeremy Gillposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

          Okay, I'm assuming it's the one article on your profile. Maybe the name change affected the link. Here's my suggestions:

          1) Watch for spelling grammar errors. "Few years later" should be "A few years later."
          2) Make some of your half-width photos full-width.
          3) Find a way to break up the text in the first half. So many paragraphs in a row without any bullet points, bolding, or other organization might lose readers' interest.
          4) Rename the capsule titled "Concluding Remarks." We're not supposed to title capsules anything similar to "introduction" or "conclusion."

          Best of luck.

          1. SSS1942 profile image80
            SSS1942posted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

            Thank you very much. I will apply those corrections.

 
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