I'd like feedback on my Hub: A note to yourself

  1. shalviwrites profile image60
    shalviwritesposted 5 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub A note to yourself (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image95
      theraggededgeposted 5 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hi there, welcome to HubPages.

      There are several issues with your article that are preventing it being approved.

      You need a search friendly title. Something that people are looking for on Google. Otherwise your hub will never be read. The title must also be written in title case (look it up).

      Break up the huge blocks of text into shorter paragraphs over several text capsules, each with a sub-heading.

      Add at least one legal-to-use image.

      Proofread for grammatical errors.

      Remove the profanities.

      If that's a quote at the end, put it in italics so that it stands out.

      If this is meant to be a helpful article, then write it like an article. Be professional - at the moment it looks like stream-of-consciousness writing. If it is journaling, then put it in a journal. HubPages requires bright, useful, informative magazine-style articles.

      Spend some time learning how to create hubs, how to use images correctly and how HubPages works. https://hubpageshelp.com

      Hope that helps smile

 
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