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I'd like feedback on my Hub: Fast track to your work

  1. kevin10love profile image60
    kevin10loveposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub Fast track to your work (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. pen promulgates profile image79
    pen promulgatesposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Kevin.
    I'm a little surprised that you didn't double check your article before submitting. I'm sorry to say, but that's wrong on your part. HP has high quality standards.
    The content of the paragraphs 'sweat it out'  and 'find your peak' is the same.
    The heading 'focus on one thing at a Time' is repeated twice.
    Heading socialize more is repeated twice

    Punctuation: Punctuation is missing throughout, particularly at the start.
    If the heading had to be repeated twice, you missed a period after the word 'time.'
    'R' in 'recent' is in capital by mistake I guess
    You missed a comma after the word worse.
    You missed a comma after 'According to the research of London Institute of Psychiatry'
    You missed a comma after indeed

    After the word constant, you have mistakenly put a comma.

    Do you have permissions to use those images?
    Images that have cco (creative common license) only can be used at HP
    Use websites like pexels and pixabay.

    Hope these help.

    1. kevin10love profile image60
      kevin10loveposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      thank u for your comments hope 2 get featured this time. I am using picture from pexels and pixbay hope to pass QA

  3. theraggededge profile image95
    theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago

    How I would love a 'plump pay hike' big_smile

    Kevin, Your writing will have to improve a great deal before you can be a HubPages contributor.

    1. kevin10love profile image60
      kevin10loveposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Ya sure madam trying to improve thanks for your comment

 
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