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I'd like feedback on my Hub: I am not Sorry Baby Wasp

  1. Emma Ignatius profile image79
    Emma Ignatiusposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my Hub I am not Sorry Baby Wasp (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. J.S.Matthew profile image83
      J.S.Matthewposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      I left you my feedback as a comment on your Hub. Well done!

      JS~

  2. pen promulgates profile image81
    pen promulgatesposted 3 weeks ago

    Hi,
    For your article:

    Use 'Title Case' for the title.

    Keep your writing in one tense. You start with past tense and then jump to present without any change in time.
    Tenses change when the time changes.

    I advise you read the faq (what makes an article successful) here is the link
    http://hubpages.com/faq/#successful-hub-aspects

    Avoid using ellipsis in your writing.
    There are many instances of that - 3 dots (...)

    You use terms like 'katia-rers,' 'Katiwa-ring’ and 'team-mafisi' Please explain what it means. Your readers won't know what they mean.

    I guess, these articles suit better as a blogpost. HP is for magazine-style informative articles.

    You have been given plenty advice for all of your other articles. Follow them.

    Good luck.

    1. Emma Ignatius profile image79
      Emma Ignatiusposted 3 weeks ago in reply to this

      You are right. Thank you

 
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