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I'd like feedback on my article: Top 10 Singers Shocking Died

  1. Sugar Faith profile image60
    Sugar Faithposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Top 10 Singers Shocking Died (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. Marketing Merit profile image88
      Marketing Meritposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      The problem lies with your grammar and spelling. Too numerous to detail. Your title does not make sense. It would be better as: "Top 10 Singers Who Have Shockingly Died."

      Do you have permission to use the photos?

      I should also add that it is Michael Jackson - not Micheal. Amy Winehouse wrote about rehab - not rehad. Finally, there is something wrong with your text under Whitney.

      Hope this helps, but this article needs a lot of work to get the English to an acceptable level.

      1. Sugar Faith profile image60
        Sugar Faithposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

        Hi thank u so much...im just wondering where do i get permission to use photos?? Because im just google search the pictures thats why..

 
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