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I'd like feedback on my article: Wasp's Mind Control Leads to a Cockroach's Doom

  1. burhanuddin1999 profile image71
    burhanuddin1999posted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Wasp's Mind Control Leads to a Cockroach's Doom (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. psycheskinner profile image80
    psycheskinnerposted 2 weeks ago

    Your language still has technical errors (although less than before) and there are other flaws such as showing a picture of the wrong cockroach species.  Overall this is a specialist topic so I think you really need to be an expert... or present it in a more entertaining way.  There are other posts about this exact topic on high authority sites.  Maybe think more about what your niche should be rather than continuously re-editing this hub.

  3. burhanuddin1999 profile image71
    burhanuddin1999posted 2 weeks ago

    I know, what do you recommend to delete this hub ?

    1. psycheskinner profile image80
      psycheskinnerposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      I recommend that you put it aside and consider it a learning experience.  But put your efforts into something likely to be more fruitful.  Sit down and think about what your special skills, interests, and areas of unusual access or insight are.  We all have them.

  4. burhanuddin1999 profile image71
    burhanuddin1999posted 2 weeks ago

    Well, but I think my article need some rephrasing because the moderator never pointed out that my article was not original.

    1. psycheskinner profile image80
      psycheskinnerposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      They give only the most general feedback about the most obvious problem. There is absolutely no promise that fixing that problem will get the hub featured.

      If you prefer to learn that yourself rather than listen to the advice of several people with a 100+ featured hubs, well, good luck with that.

      But if you choose topics where you have special insight, you will get hubs approved a lot quicker, and they will get more traffic.  This is a volume business.

 
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