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I'd like feedback on my article: Being your own Best friend!

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    Mahruqmposted 2 weeks ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Being your own Best friend! (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

    1. theraggededge profile image96
      theraggededgeposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Hello,

      Sorry to have to tell you, but your English is not yet at the standard that HubPages requires. HubPages is geared towards an English speaking readership and, therefore, your work has to be near-perfect in order to be a writer here.

      You need to work on grammar, punctuation and phrasing. My suggestion is that you go and improve your English - you are almost there, so don't lose hope - then come back and try again.

      Good luck.

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        Mahruqmposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

        Thankyou....will do my homework and get back with a bang!smile

  2. pen promulgates profile image81
    pen promulgatesposted 2 weeks ago

    I agree with THERAGGEDEDGE. Besides, you use ellipsis (...) a lot. Spacing issues are there throughout (after a comma and a period, there must be a space before the next sentence starts).
    Sentences are a little hard to read as they are long.
    Good luck.

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      Mahruqmposted 2 weeks ago in reply to this

      Thankyou....will work on it.

 
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