I'd like feedback on my article: Tourist Attractions in Afghanistan, Bamyan

  1. Baktash profile image60
    Baktashposted 12 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Tourist Attractions in Afghanistan, Bamyan (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 12 days ago

    There are issues with grammar and spelling


    "Is there any thing in Afghanistan for tourists?" Subheads should be in Title Face and the word is anything, not two words.


    "From cites ( should that be cities or sites? built by the great Alexander (normally referred to as Alexander the Great) to remaining (remnants) of Islamic civilization and remaining of cites (as above) destroyed by Genghis Khan, this is the rarely discovered country."

    These are just a few examples. I can't coach you on all the errors in the piece.

    Try running your copy through a free program such as Grammarly or Hemingway to pick up problems with English.

 
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