I'd like feedback on my article: Why are we usually running out of time?

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    Aya aya ahmedposted 10 days ago

    Hi Hubbers,

    I'd like some help with passing the Quality Assessment Process. Will you please give feedback on my article Why are we usually running out of time? (must be signed in to view). What can I do to improve? Thanks!

  2. Rupert Taylor profile image94
    Rupert Taylorposted 10 days ago

    Punctuation is an issue. There is never a space before a punctuation mark. Verb tenses  and grammar are a problem.

    "Do we have less time than before ? Does our time seems (seem) no longer unlimited ? Or are we too busy with many gadgets that conquered (conquer) our lives ? Or do we shoulder greater burdens that accelerated (accelerate) the pace of life ?!" (no exclamation mark)

    There are random capital letters that should not be capitalized. Never use an ampersand - & - in text.

    Your image is not credited and may not be free of copyright restrictions.

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