I have just finished a hub on the painting "The Last Supper" and its association with the myth of the holy grail....could you critique so I can improve it if need?
http://hubpages.com/hub/The-Last-Supper … Holy-Grail
Mugshot I read this by way of just coming across it. Just saw your post now. I've read it and left a comment - whatever I read, I always leave a comment.
Anyway - read what I said
Thanks both and to everyone who has commented on the hub, I have taken feedback and added two more coded messages to the hub and will write more about the painting itself shortly.
I think the text is great, and well-written.
I do think you should re-arrange your capsules a bit. The amazon ones would be better to the right of text, not on their own, I think.
Thanks for the tip.....(blushes) how do I move the Amazon modules to the right of the text :S
On any of the non-text capsules, you can move them to the right of a text capsule by pressing the ---> green arrow, and move them back by pressing the one looking like this <---->
Woo thanks thats a great tool! Ive done as you said with my Amazon capsules and moved them within my text.
You can do it with photos, links, vidoes - the whole lot. Have a look at this hub, for example, which does it with all of them:
http://hubpages.com/hub/King-Henry-VIII … d-children
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