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Create A Story- I'll begin

  1. AsherKade profile image77
    AsherKadeposted 8 years ago

    This isn't like many...it's a crime or mystery story. I want everyone to add five to ten words that are related to crime,suspense, thriller,or mystery. I'll Begin!

    In a lonely, dark, receding part of the woods...

  2. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    By an old cabin...abandoned for years...

  3. brad4l profile image85
    brad4lposted 8 years ago

    , a man stood and peered through the broken window.

  4. lrohner profile image84
    lrohnerposted 8 years ago

    He brushed away cobwebs and then saw...

  5. RooBee profile image85
    RooBeeposted 8 years ago

    there in the refracted light, one tiny

  6. R. Blue profile image60
    R. Blueposted 8 years ago

    candle burning on the table

  7. nyliram profile image61
    nyliramposted 8 years ago

    He walked over to its hazy shimmer

  8. RooBee profile image85
    RooBeeposted 8 years ago

    and ran his hand through the flame, feeling nothing.

  9. kmackey32 profile image80
    kmackey32posted 8 years ago

    He then turned and heard some noise comming from the bedroom.

  10. Beth100 profile image85
    Beth100posted 8 years ago

    hidden in the shadows a ghostly figure

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    wordscribe41posted 8 years ago

    Darkness spread across the cabin as the candle spontaneously extinguished

  12. thranax profile image49
    thranaxposted 8 years ago

    Scared and panic stricken he raced to find a light...

  13. HealthCare Basics profile image82
    HealthCare Basicsposted 8 years ago

    a cold wetness felt across his face and shoulder, dripping warm fluid down his arm..........

  14. Which4u profile image59
    Which4uposted 8 years ago

    He jerked forward and spun round in panic, a yelp left his mouth that made a cold chill shoot down his back....

  15. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    Surely...he expected to see "One-Eyed" Jack Thomas coming for retribution...

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    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    But there in front of his eyes was a man far

  17. profile image0
    \Brenda Scullyposted 8 years ago

    more scary than One "Eyed Jack".....

  18. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    It was "Black Tooth" Henry Lamar...and he wanted his share of...

  19. Beth100 profile image85
    Beth100posted 8 years ago

    retribution, and of course fame, by throwing the first punch to chip a tooth...

  20. R. Blue profile image60
    R. Blueposted 8 years ago

    from the man who had stolen his

  21. Tom Cornett profile image57
    Tom Cornettposted 8 years ago

    virginity at summer camp

  22. AEvans profile image71
    AEvansposted 8 years ago

    he began to unleash his anger

  23. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    in a twisted, vile, and disgusting manner by...

  24. soni2006 profile image49
    soni2006posted 8 years ago

    hitting his hand hard on the

  25. Mrvoodoo profile image61
    Mrvoodooposted 8 years ago

    gigantic, pulsating, throbbing...

  26. soni2006 profile image49
    soni2006posted 8 years ago

    demon of the underworld

  27. Candie V profile image69
    Candie Vposted 8 years ago

    - RBlue, or was it really?

  28. G-Ma Johnson profile image60
    G-Ma Johnsonposted 8 years ago

    ....a gentle, yet lonely , stranger

  29. Eaglekiwi profile image74
    Eaglekiwiposted 8 years ago

    heavily disguised as a politician

  30. bluebird profile image73
    bluebirdposted 8 years ago

    when suddenly, the enemy, whoever he was or whatever he looked like, reached in his pocket and pulled out a

  31. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    coupon for buy 1, get 1 free, hamburgers down at the local Burger Stand...

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    wordscribe41posted 8 years ago

    the place where the infamous cheeseburger murders took place in 1930.

  33. soni2006 profile image49
    soni2006posted 8 years ago

    which turned out not be hamburgers but flesh of

  34. Laura Berwick profile image88
    Laura Berwickposted 8 years ago

    Just the thought sent a chill down his spine, and his knees started to

  35. soni2006 profile image49
    soni2006posted 8 years ago

    tremble and give way with fear of

  36. Laura Berwick profile image88
    Laura Berwickposted 8 years ago

    Butterflies -- they had been left at the scene of the crime.

  37. soni2006 profile image49
    soni2006posted 8 years ago

    and there was butter too on the bread mixed with blood and

  38. Candie V profile image69
    Candie Vposted 8 years ago

    A page from the TV Guide crossword puzzle

  39. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    which had the answer to 13 down written in blood

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    wordscribe41posted 8 years ago

    and 4 across written in unintelligible symbols.

  41. Candie V profile image69
    Candie Vposted 8 years ago

    and a smiley face? What did that mean?

  42. manlypoetryman profile image68
    manlypoetrymanposted 8 years ago

    He was puzzled...though it was a good rendering of a smiley face...

  43. viryabo profile image86
    viryaboposted 8 years ago

    SUDDENLY,an eerie silence, then the THUMP! THUMP! THUMP! SCREAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM

  44. Tom Cornett profile image57
    Tom Cornettposted 8 years ago

    Oh yeah...this new Swimsuit issue rocks!

  45. Eaglekiwi profile image74
    Eaglekiwiposted 8 years ago

    She spun ,she twirled , she pouted,
    Til the camera man

  46. RedElf profile image85
    RedElfposted 8 years ago

    vengeance in his black heart, smothered her with Smiley, shouting

  47. AsherKade profile image77
    AsherKadeposted 8 years ago

    ya'll are hysterical...
    big_smile

  48. RooBee profile image85
    RooBeeposted 8 years ago

    "How ... is this ... funny?" she gasped  wink

  49. AsherKade profile image77
    AsherKadeposted 8 years ago

    you're BO is outrageous and there's sewer build up fuming from nearby...

  50. AsherKade profile image77
    AsherKadeposted 8 years ago

    that explained the odd noises and jolted the sinister man's evil ploy...

    1. usmanali81 profile image60
      usmanali81posted 8 years ago in reply to this

      the sinister man was a Freemason

 
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