I just became a member of the HubPages community, and wrote my first hub, tell me what you think, give me feed back and ideas!
Some pictures would be good, of all the great places you have been. Interesting hub.
Apart from what have been said, perhaps allow me to suggest that you should break the text into shorter paragraphs for better readability.
Still it's a well-written hub. Oh yeah, images does wonder.
Gotta get the pictures, man. Never underestimate the power of pictures on a hub.
alright, i put some pictures up, im going to scan some more and get them on the computer, and put those up, figured i should maybe put up 3 for each place, or do u guys think that will over crowed it?
I agree that your hub is well-written, and the paragraphs need to be broken up for added readability. You can do this by adding headings. The logical place in your hub, of course, being at the place where you have changed countries.
Your experiences are interesting and I have noticed that travel hubs do well here. Keep it fresh with your personal photos, particularly if you are a good photographer.
Oh--and do use the spell checker provided with the text editor. That will increase your score, too.
Three pics for each place probably isn't too much. So much is published on HP and good photos will keep people reading.
Welcome to HubPages, etb50 I agree with our fellow Hubbers...photos and break up the text into smaller paragraphs and overall,...a awesome Hub
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