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I need some input

  1. ClassyRichardson profile image61
    ClassyRichardsonposted 7 years ago

    I love to write poems and I would like to see if everyone likes this one as much as I do. Thank You.

    What is Beauty

    Unaware and delusional
    Staring at the beauty that stood before her
    So close and so touchable
    Life seemed to stop and stood behind her
    Not a blemish not a scrape
    So perfect Made gold look like waste
    O how I wish to be her
    So may will bow and respect her
    Her confidences soar along with the eagles
    And her gentleness felt softer than silk
    She held herself with elegance
    And her pride stood masculine as the lion
    Now being aware, and stepping out of delusion
    She notice the beauty that stood before her
    Her own image in the mirror,
    Showing the reflection of her inner soul
    That she kept so pure
    More pure than precious gold
    And now able to see
    Her own beauty that was held within

  2. Ambition profile image74
    Ambitionposted 7 years ago

    very nice written, why don't you make hub of this payment

    1. ClassyRichardson profile image61
      ClassyRichardsonposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I'm still learning how to work this site. It would be nice to have some help.

  3. dannyb1974 profile image61
    dannyb1974posted 7 years ago

    very nice
    what you can do is write a new hub with a new poem
    ad your adsense etc and when people click through you earn!!

    good if earning is not your main goal though as peoms are so inspirational.
    you could then add amazon and reccomend some books that you like or use, again when people buy you earn a bit.

    all the best


    danny

    1. ClassyRichardson profile image61
      ClassyRichardsonposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thanks Danny I'll try that smile

 
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