http://hubpages.com/hub/How-To-Write-Good-PoetryI just wrote this hub and wanted to see what you think of it. Is it good or bad? Anything I could add? Just wanted to see your views. Panda Man
I certainly did Pamda
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Lol what do you mean a Playstation??
Lol. Never mind. I was trying to count the number of 's on this thread.
I like ti poem it shows emotion which is what poetry is only on paper the only advice is to try to stay away from line that rhyme for the sake of it.Keep writing
Love's Refrain My Heart's beatin fasterMy temperature's on the riseThis sweet feelinIs impossible to disguisePlease hold me closerTell me you'll stayHere in my armsAnd kiss me all dayI'll shower you with kissesLike rain from aboveAnd whisper in your earWords filled with loveSoft like puttyHere in my armsBodies pressed together Feelin your charmsThere's no place betterThen being here with youFor the rest of my daysThat's all I wanna do!Huggin and kissinThe peaks of passion we'll climbOver the edge we'll fallTogether ‘till the end of timeLost in this momentCaptured by our gazeOur lips come togetherOur thoughts in a hazeLingering lightly whileWe look deep in our soulsThen lips slowly partingOur tongues explore new worlds Lost in sweet ecstasyWe search to find our wayTo keep this feelin growinTo make it last all day!
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