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Critique Me

  1. marinealways24 profile image60
    marinealways24posted 7 years ago

    -This post is for entertainment and self knowledge. I would like anyone willing that knows me or assumes to know me to put me in check. I would like true 3rd person perspectives of my faults. I assure you, I will not take offense. I am not looking for compliments, only faults.

    -Thread open to anyone that wants a 3rd person perspective of themselves.

    1. goodfriendiam profile image61
      goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      you slobber way to much, maybe you need to put your tongue back in your mouth.............lol smile

      1. marinealways24 profile image60
        marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        lmao, anything besides that on the human critique?

        1. goodfriendiam profile image61
          goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Nope can't think of anything off the top of my head but when I do I will let you know....all wait, you are a hot head once in a while...or is that a pot head......lol

          1. marinealways24 profile image60
            marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

            I will agree to both and plead the 5th in response. lol


            I did, still do have hot head problems even though I try to let it go. The cage fight and MMA really helped me put myself in check.

    2. tantrum profile image60
      tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        In a forum you never get the whole pic. You can be mislead. That's why I'm not going to criticize you. All I'm going to say is that I liked what I read so far. And you make me laugh. Not of you but with you lol

      1. marinealways24 profile image60
        marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Thanks Sir. I think I try to leave things open to interpretation sometimes to get a persons true thoughts. I don't want a trained answer to a question. I want individual thought. I enjoy laughing with you as well. Ty

    3. darkside profile image82
      darksideposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      My opinion of you is you take offense far too easily.

      1. marinealways24 profile image60
        marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

        lol that's not a very in depth critique, but thank you.

        1. darkside profile image82
          darksideposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          There's no need for waffle when the point is so obvious.

          And there's no mention of "in depth" in the opening post.

          1. marinealways24 profile image60
            marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

            lol ok thanks

  2. goodfriendiam profile image61
    goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago

    someone wants to critique me please do? I could use all the help I can get?..........seriously....right this very moment I have a hangover.....any word of advice....lol  and yes I am serious I could use the help at seeing where some of my faults are

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      I think the first part to understanding yourself is what you just did. Being open to 3rd person critique without taking offense. Why do you drink, for the entertainment or for a need?

      1. goodfriendiam profile image61
        goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Um well I went with out drinking for ten years more or less, do to religious beliefs, so when I finally woke up to the fact that there is nothing wrong with drinking, its all in the way you of see it that makes the difference. I  have an occasional drink. I guess it just depends. sometimes I drink just to have a drink, as in sitting around with my friends, and then other times, like last night I had a need. (Heck I use to be able to drink a 12 pack of beer and a couple of shoots before I was passed out, now it takes only three beers, and I have had enough.)

        1. marinealways24 profile image60
          marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

          I used to work as a bouncer in a bar for around 5 years. I have seen many of the negative effects of the alcohol compared to few positives. I think alocohol and weed can/should always be used in moderation if used. I sometimes have trouble with moderation myself, but I do make a concentrated effort.

          1. goodfriendiam profile image61
            goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            absolutely, I only have a couple beers a week, and sometimes I don't have any at all. Now coffee well that there my dear, is a whole other story. Though I have to say since I have left my husband, I don't abuse it as much, nor do I use food to pacify my emotions.  Weed na I do not care for it, period never did won't go back there.

            1. marinealways24 profile image60
              marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

              To each their own, coffee, alcohol, or weed. I only suggest moderation from personal experience. I think it says a lot about you in your last statement. You sound individually strong minded "now" since you have left, I don't know if your were before or not? It also says a lot about you that you can seperate materialistic like food or other emotional supports in favor of learning instead of a quick fix.

              1. goodfriendiam profile image61
                goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

                Oh I think I was individually strong minded before I left my husband, the only thing is I could never do anything right, so I guess because I felt worthless, confused, and down right angry,and was in so much pain  I had to find something to try and fill the emptiness, the numbness the loneliness, that I ate, and drank a lot of coffee.

                1. marinealways24 profile image60
                  marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

                  What is the learned solution?

                  1. goodfriendiam profile image61
                    goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

                    to keep my emotions in check

  3. shamelabboush profile image70
    shamelabboushposted 7 years ago

    You have such a strong philosophical background but you never use it! try to write FULL hubs about what bothers you, moves you the most. Besides that, you're very good and readable.

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Ty for commenting shamel. I think I have ADD problems when writing the hubs. I lose concentration too easily and get bored. It seems to be easier for me to get my thoughts down in a poem form rather than a drawn out hub. Ty for the input.

      1. shamelabboush profile image70
        shamelabboushposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        nontheless, you're a good hubber but you should find a solution for that. Get in a nice quiet place with low music effects. Have tea and start writing slowly. If you can't finish it today, proceed the day after and so forth...

        1. marinealways24 profile image60
          marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Usually when I write them and come back to them, I lose my train of thought and can't find it again. I will try your suggestions. Thank You. What do you mean writing philosophy?

  4. sparksdaniel2000 profile image80
    sparksdaniel2000posted 7 years ago

    this is fascinating...do I have to know you to reply, or can I just read your hubs?

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Either one, and nope, you don't have to know me. Thank You

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    ralwusposted 7 years ago

    thinker and moderate drinker, slobbery, too furry, patriot a good thinker and a trouble maker that can be fugly. I think I love you.
    http://www.clipartof.com/images/thumbnail/731.gif

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lmao ty for the critique. Change "drinker" to "smoker" and I think you have me covered. Love you too old guy, thanks for beating my head to a bloody pulp with a fish. lol

  6. Misha profile image76
    Mishaposted 7 years ago

    Umm, you definitely are a thinking person, and seem to posses a sense of humor and be genuinely polite towards others.

    Your opinion is often different from mine, but this could not be entirely your fault, your upbringing and environment definitely play a role. wink


    I can probably recall you losing your cool on the forums once, but it's pretty much it. smile

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank You for adding Misha, Much Appreciated. I do try to make a set point to keep myself in check and respect others, even when I don't agree. Very helpful critique, Thank You Sir.

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    ralwusposted 7 years ago

    Ah well, what can I say. I do love ya marine. Good man ya are and I don't care what any one else says. We all have problems and foibles and Misha is mine. LOL

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lol

      You and Misha are both good men as well. True thinkers are always appreciated.

  8. Misha profile image76
    Mishaposted 7 years ago

    LOL Charlie, you are not alone, Misha is such a pain in the ass for myself! smile

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    Hmmm....critique you huh? You are funny as all hell. Does that work? Especially when you think I'm going to cuss you out for asking me anything personal. hehehe

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lol yes, that works, that was a compliment though. You were supposed to cuss me out or tell me that my hubs suck and that I am insane. lol

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        Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Okay hold on *clears throat* Okay I'm ready... you *beep beep beep beep* *coughs* okay I can't do it lmao

        1. tantrum profile image60
          tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          You can'ttalk on the phone, now you can't talk to marine.... Maybe if i get you some pills ? big_smile

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            Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            lmao I can talk to him just can't cuss him out...he didn't do anything to deserve it so nope can't do it lol

            1. tantrum profile image60
              tantrumposted 7 years ago in reply to this

              Come on !! sing with me
              Wonder Woman...Womder woman..! lol

            2. marinealways24 profile image60
              marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

              lol I wrote my last comment before reading this one. lol

        2. marinealways24 profile image60
          marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

          lol thanks, that put me in check. I am beeped out. You are too nice, even your beeps are nice! lol Thanks for beeping me out.

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    annvansposted 7 years ago

    Yer questions are too hard for simple people like me to answer.  Not all of them, but some of them. 

    P.S.  I don't wanna hear what anyone thinksa me. lol

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Sorry about that, I try to write things easily understandable, but I have bad grammar along with poor punctuation. lol If it makes you feel any better, sometimes I don't even know what i'm asking. lol

      Thank You


      "P.S.  I don't wanna hear what anyone thinksa me."

      lol

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        annvansposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Ah Ha!  I knew this was the case with you, I was just trying to get you to admit it.

        1. marinealways24 profile image60
          marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

          lol anytime.

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    ralwusposted 7 years ago

    I tink ya r genuine. My heart hub is waiting for ya. yer a kewl dude.

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Likewise, ty Sir. I look forward to reading it. Thank You.

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    sh!t Tantrum I'm not Wonder woman lmao.

    and hehehe marine my beeps are nice? shoot have to work on that one lmao



    Oh and you guys can critique me if you want. I can handle it. big_smile

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lol I don't know enough about ya to critique. I know you put me in good spirits with most of your forum responses. That has to count for something. Also, you don't cuss me out. lol


      Maybe list some flaws?

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        annvansposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        Dang marine, do people actually cuss you out???  I would be afraid that if I cussed you out that you would come back with some hard to answer stuff.  I am smart nuff not to cuss you out fer nothin. 

        I know you would be using all these big words and I wouldn't know how to respond back to you if I cussed you out and you responded to it.

        1. marinealways24 profile image60
          marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

          lol you are silly, but you made me lol, so ty. I would probably ask some questions that I knew they didn't have the answers to. Lmao. Good call. As for the big words, I don't have many of those rambling around. I will leave the big words to the educated ones. lol

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            annvansposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            Well if you don't use big words, then I guess the ones you use, I have to keep looking in the dictionary for.  I guess I do not know most of the words you use.  Many times I click on the thread and read it, then I can't understand it since I do not know what the words mean.  I have to give up and type something off the wall in there.  I cannot be alone in this since I seen others in there saying "what?"  lol.  I guess I didn't feel the need to learn the big ol words since no one in my hometown could pronounce them anyhow. lol.

            1. marinealways24 profile image60
              marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

              lol we may be in the same town. If I use any weird words from here on out, holler at me and point it out so I know what you are talking about. lol If I know what it means, I will explain it. lol

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                annvansposted 7 years ago in reply to this

                I am just joking pickin fun about your words like critique and enlighten and all that.  I have to look em up.  Actually it is not you using the big words, it is me that cant understand basic stuff I guess.  Poor me, oh me, poor me.  Bless my heart.  Please don't make fun of me...I am southern and thats the way I speak.  lol.

                1. marinealways24 profile image60
                  marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

                  lol , no way you are southern. I am from South Carolina, I would have never guessed you southern. lol Where from?

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        Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        List some flaws? hmmm....one big one is I'm weird lol I have low self esteem...I jump to conclusions too fast sometimes. I am a worry-wort....ummm......there are other things but i can't tihnk lol

        1. goodfriendiam profile image61
          goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Me to crazdwriter  Im a worry wart, and smoke to many cigarettes. lol

          1. marinealways24 profile image60
            marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

            Ciggs are bad, but they do taste good in the morn. lol

        2. readytoescape profile image60
          readytoescapeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          I thought we covered all that yesterday,,,

        3. marinealways24 profile image60
          marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

          No such thing as weird to me because everyone has a different idea of what weird is. I think of weird = individual. Why do you think the low self esteem?

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    Power to the worry warts! woohoo lol

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    annvansposted 7 years ago

    k, now I am all uptight reading flaws and warts and stuff.  Gonna go smoke a cig.

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    Nope we just covered one of my weird attributes I have many more hehehe

    1. readytoescape profile image60
      readytoescapeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Lets not do that again, I only have one bottle of scotch left

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        Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

        LOL I'm not the one making your drink it, readytoescape that is ALL you dude

        1. readytoescape profile image60
          readytoescapeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

          Yeah but its good stuff, you however did perpetuate it, yesterday atleast, Finally had someone to blame it on that couldnt deny it...

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            Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago in reply to this

            I didn't start anything. another pereson was jsut giving me advice about sleeping remedies ie drinking and then you started in. still all your fault lmao

            1. readytoescape profile image60
              readytoescapeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

              All I did was agree with him...except for the fire starting

            2. goodfriendiam profile image61
              goodfriendiamposted 7 years ago in reply to this

              Lets just call it a night, and says its the both your faults and be done with it all and open up another bottle of scotch.........lol

              1. readytoescape profile image60
                readytoescapeposted 7 years ago in reply to this

                Well I was going to wait til later but if you insist

  16. readytoescape profile image60
    readytoescapeposted 7 years ago

    As to MarineAlways2, This is his forum you know, interesting background, Semper Fi troop! Like how you worked it into your By Line.

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      Thank You. You guys are fine, good reading! lol

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    I agree with goodfriend, we are both to blame...now open your scotch HAHA

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    Crazdwriterposted 7 years ago

    there now you can blame her not me this time lmao

  19. manlypoetryman profile image72
    manlypoetrymanposted 7 years ago

    http://images.u4prez.com/Images/R%20LEE%20ERMEY-128618640643310322.jpg

    I couldn't think of anything to critique you on, Marine Always...so I went and found the "Gunny". He said he would be happy to do it...!

    1. marinealways24 profile image60
      marinealways24posted 7 years ago in reply to this

      lol I really don't like that guy. He is a great actor though. Ty Sir.

 
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