Wrote my first hub and tweaked it and tweaked it - but it still doesn't seem right. Is it too long? Should I break it into two hubs? If so, should I start two new hubs and unpublish this one or edit this one and add one more new one?
Hub is at http://hubpages.com/hub/What-is-food-in … -diet-work
I agree with BC, you present the information clear and have all the relevant tags. Great job on your first hub.
Thanks guys! So fast too - I'd left to get a cuppa!
First date jitters I guess! And you've all posted lots of good hubs yourselves so I feel you know what you're talking about.
Thanks so much - it's very reassuring. I'll leave it alone now and perhaps concentrate on doing another hub.
It's good to have a forum like this - I think I'd have gone potty without having some kind of feedback soon!
Thanks for spending the time.
Did I say thank you yet?
It's a great Hub, with a good mix of text, photos and illustrations.
An important suggestion: make the first paragraph a little longer. If it's a few lines longer, you'll find an Adsense ad appears in the top right hand corner - that's the prime money-making position (you can see where the ads will be in the "Preview" screen).
I think there is potential to split this into two or even three Hubs if, as I suspect, you have more material to expand on each of the sections.
What you could do is see if you can write individual Hubs with more detail on the various aspects - then when they're done, go back and revise the original so it's a kind of "summary" Hub, with links to all the more detailed Hubs. Something to think about.
Wow! Thanks Marisa! I wouldn't have known about the need for a longer first paragraph to get the ad - that is really handy to know. And your idea for generating new hubs then using the original as a summary solves my dilemna about not wasting the hub I've already done! Perfect! I really appreciate your advice. Thanks again.
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