Looks good. But you really should break up some of those long, long paragraphs. You don't need to start a new capsule. Just break it into 2 or 3 smaller paragraphs.
And I've seen a marked increase in traffic for those hubs where I originally had a photo in the first spot and then moved it down into the hub somewhere. I also don't put pics in the first paragraph anymore. Can't explain it, but I do get more traffic with them buried in the hub.
Thanks will definatly try it and see what happens. Appreciate the advice!!
Those seed great as is! Maybe playing around with paragraph length like Ironhner suggested might help, but other then that there very nice.
nice work on the editing, I remember looking at it when it was mostly just pics. But... still have those large blocks of text. You don't need to break it into more capsules if you don't want to, although that would help your ad placement, but at least break the text up into paragraphs. Good progress though
I agree, each of your paragraphs should be about three paragraphs. I feel like I don't get time to breathe reading them!
It's not a bad idea to break them over a couple of capsules - if yyou decide to tweak them again later, it's easier.
Glad I decided to read through this, I didn't know you could do more than one text capsule. I tried to put ads in the middle just to break it up like I've seen in other hubs but it didn't work. Now I know why!
by Pamela Kinnaird W6 years ago
A very kind soul noticed a month ago that I need to learn how to break up my text with photos or something between the paragraphs when my text is long. She explained how to do it. I tried and couldn't grasp...
by Jean Bakula6 years ago
I seem to have come to HP just before all the changes. I have put in almost F/T hours on the days I write my hubs. I've read whole books, not only the ones I review, but for material for my hubs. I think what I write is...
by aa lite4 years ago
This might be a complete co-incidence, but I switched to the new profile a couple of days ago, and today Google is pretending it doesn't know me. Hubs that ranked on the first page for main keyword are not found...
by Lily Rose6 years ago
I'm a bit lost and unsure if there's anything I can to to increase revenue from one particular hub of mine: http://hubpages.com/hub/wall-decor-photo-displayThis one hub accounts for 27%-35% of my daily views, every...
by Gabe Abbott7 years ago
I published my first hub today. The first comment I got remarked that my hub was funny. It's not. I can see that maybe a scan of the first paragraph might lead a casual reader to think that the hub may be going in an...
by Melanie Shebel6 years ago
You are only as fast as your slowest component... errr whatever the quote is. Well, it's not entirely true... I STILL will profit off of my best performing hub even though I have those poor performing ones, but I...
Copyright © 2017 HubPages Inc. and respective owners.
Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners.
HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc.
HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.